=== REPORT SPELLING ERRORS HERE ===

[Fon]

Hojo, remember to give specific instructions of where to find the location the spelling error occurs. You have to realize how many places in Valorn your error may be located?

He is referring to an enchantment/blessing...I believe.

[Hojo Musachi]

sorry, it happened when the golden age machine shoock the ground, it happened twice today......

[Ildara]

I noticed a slight spelling error when I was fighting as Kira. When she fumbled her attack it said :
Demon Scorpion takes no damage due to deflecting all 0 points of Kira Brown 's attack
Kira Brown fumbles hers attack!

It should be "fumbles her attack!"

Thank you.

[Aaronar]

Forge of War

The forge has an very small, round opening where an object can be inserted. The opening looks like it could accomodate some kind of bladed weapon or shaft.

Should be "a".

[Talis]

Lower Ice Caverns, from entrance, three steps west, then one south.

Room description ends " From the pelts and bloodstains, it looks like a couple animals have started to call this place home."

I think there should be an 'of ' between couple and animals

[Fleur]

Oh you Aberdonian, you.
I think as a fellow 'english English' speaker I reported that one too, but omitting the 'of' is entirely alright in 'american English'

[artzamy23]

Actually, the statement without the word "of" is awkward even in "American English". *smiling*

[The Darkest Star]

Lower Ice Caverns, from entrance, three steps west, then one south.

Room description ends " From the pelts and bloodstains, it looks like a couple animals have started to call this place home."

I think there should be an 'of ' between couple and animals

To continue with Fleur's comment if it's going to be Aberdonian, should that not be "Fae the pelts an' bloodstains, twa beasties hiv stairted a hoosie here"

I barely understand Aberdonian but it's a fair stab at it*

*I'm Scottish, I'm allowed to gently poke fun at our regional accents

[Fleur]

Informal usage of the word 'couple' can be taken as a direct synonym of the word 'two' or 'a few'. So you wouldn't say 'a 2 of animals.' You'd just say '2 animals.' This is the case where saying 'a couple animals' is ok. so it's probably an american colloquialism. it's informal, but passable in american usage.

[Topaz]

In the Sepulcher of Sinalton the Just (south end of the third level of the N'rolav tombs) is a last line that reads in part: " ... you cannot make out the LITERNAY carved upon its open pages." This should read " ... you cannot make out the LITANY carved upon its open pages."


Topaz

[Korba]

Iron Knight Patton

"A jolly man by nature, Patton is still more apt to answer questions with a soft grunt and the upward quirk of his dark eyebrows then with his deep voice.

then should be than

EDIT - Jake pointed out on the Ultimate Weapon of The Iron Knights the effect is "transport to fortres" should be "fortress"

Korba

[Islander]

edit: fixed

[Topaz]

The "pummel" of Iron Knight Malvlad's sword should be a "pommel."

"... there IS thousands of plat" should be " ... there ARE thousands of plat."



Topaz

[Klesk]

For item "Ultimate Weapon of The Iron Knights":

Str: 1 Con: 1 Dex: 1 Int: 1 AC: 4 Attack: 41 Light Source: 1 Charges: 29 *Noblility Required* Effect: transport to fortres Professions: ( ANY )

[Islander]

edit: fixed

[Blythe]

Iron Knight Xormien

"This short, limber man delights in laughter, song, and dance. A twinkling eye, the strains of music, and lips that curve in ready laughter do not seem to be the hallmark of a battle scarred warrior. However for anyone with eyes to look past the merriment and notice the disciplined movement of this tall, lanky warrior it is readily ..."

He is described as both Short and Tall.

[Islander]

edit: has been fixed

[Hojo Musachi]

An brilliant beam of light flashes from the sky....

shouldn't it be A brilliant beam of light flashes from the sky....

[Aaronar]

A musty room

The walls in this room are large stone blocks. Moss gross up the walls as if no one had been in this place for ages. The floor is the only sign of any recent activity in the area. A wet path lines the floor as if people have walked through after a very recent rain.

Not sure exactly where these musty rooms are, but the two that I did see both had gross instead of grows.

[Thorne Blackrose]

On the home page of DG it says, "...your strongest weapon against the coming hordes is the comradery you develop with others."

It should be camaraderie.