Postby Llyewell » Thu Apr 23, 2015 3:03 pm
N'rolav plains:
The twisted, knarled, naked branches of a gigantic tree of awe-inspiring girth towers over you to the southeast, it's black, oily bark glistens in the light.
Corrected spelling and removal of unnecessary apostrophe:
The twisted, gnarled, naked branches of a gigantic tree of awe-inspiring girth towers over you to the southeast, its black, oily bark glistens in the light.
Fixed - Z
Strength t'yer sword arm, the same t'our bond. Life t'ye, an' keep ye strong.