Postby Ben » Sun Mar 04, 2007 7:34 am
Examples for people having trouble with this:
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EXAMPLES IN A PERFECT PROFILE THAT MAKE THE GODS HAPPY AND PROMOTE GOOD ROLEPLAYING. This category is mostly made up of "first impression" type information... things that somebody who stops and stares at you for a few moments or minutes, observing you carefully, can see or figure out.
"Sylar has shifty eyes, and he always seems to be looking for his next kill."
"Bruce carries himself as most billionaires do, although some can detect that he has a dark secret."
"Eva is quite stunning, and always takes the time to do her makeup and comb out her hair before taking part in the day's hunting and festivities."
"A long, festive cape adorns her back, billowing dramatically whenever the wind gusts."
"His hair is the color of desert sand, his eyes blue as Lake Valorn."
"Conan, standing nearly 7 feet tall, has a huge puff of bright red hair adorning his massive head."
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EXAMPLES OF THINGS THAT, IN A PERFECT WORLD, WOULD NOT BE IN ANY PROFILES. NEVERTHELESS, THESE THINGS ARE ALLOWED BECAUSE PEOPLE DON'T ALWAYS WANT TO BE UNLAZY AND HAVE TO "MEET" EVERY NEW PERSON. These are the types of things that people should not know just by looking at you... they should have to get to know you through roleplaying to learn them. BUT, when tastefully presented, we forgive your lack of roleplaying in presenting these things upfront instead of during gameplay and conversation, because we know some people just don't want to repeat their backstory 3 times a day for weeks and weeks until they are famous. Motivations, history, relationships, and other personal tidbits fall in this category. Also note that the more famous you become, the more "okay" it is to have a profile with these things in it. Like, if you are the High Queen of Valorn, people mostly know your backstory. If you are Joe N00b, people probably haven't heard your life story being told around the campfire, though.
"Luke was mentored in the ways of a warrior by his sponsor, Yoda."
"Although Sonny is known as a bit of a loner, he was bonded recently to his beautiful partner, Cher, and they have planned a wonderful life together."
"Veronica was born into a world of intrigue. Her father, Keith, taught her the ways of a rogue detective from a very young age."
"Dresden has recently decided to take on the task of becoming an enchanter, when he reaches the right level of training."
"Chuck's blinding roundhouse kick has defeated many enemies, including the Zombie Ravager and the Sea Dweller Death Lord."
"Kratos lost his family when he mistakenly struck them down in the heat of battle. He has vowed to defeat the Demon Lord and to seek vengeance on the forces of darkness, whom he blames for his family's death."
"Clark is not from Valorn, and is not sure where he was born. He was adopted by his parents, simple farmers from Fartown, as a baby, and was raised as their own."
"Chino is a proud member of the guild, "The Sharks," which he just recently joined."
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EXAMPLES OF THINGS THAT ARE NOT ALLOWED. These things are indelicately presented, unartfully listed things that have always been against the rules, but are just now being enforced heavily. Get rid of them now.
"Best Friends: Kara, Lee, Dualla, Sharon. Enemies: Gaius."
"Will trade $$$ for: crystals, amulet of the order, weapon prims!!!"
"Hey you jerk... you know who you are! You tried to ruin my life here, but I won't let you! Everybody knows what a punk you are!"
"If I'm not around, please leave a message for me. I promise to get back to you."
"You can see what I look like by clicking here!: ::URL::" [NOTE: please remember that this example is actually COMPLETELY OKAY if your picture or other link is located in the dgplayers network. Hosting via dgplayers is an exception to the rule and lets you get away with it.]
"Happily bonded to Bobby Ewing on February 3rd, 2007, at 02 marcs!"
"My guild is the The Gramercy Rifts. Come stop by our website if you are interested in joining!"
"I'd be happy to recharge your energy or cast an enchantment on your weapon... just ask!"
"Vote for me and give me stature, and I will be happy to return the favor! Just send me a message after you vote!"
"Richard, I love you, and would be happy to be bonded to you for the 3rd time. Love, Elizabeth."
Ben
Grimoire Entertainment Inc.
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