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In the Hollowed Tree north of the statue. This area darker then the other areas. This Sunken into the walls are bits and pieces of skeletons. There are exits to the east and the south. Shouldn't there be an is after the first word area and shouldn't then be than? As for the second part... not to su...

On the western most edge of the milltown fruit orchard, there is repeated the word "stonewall" at the beginning of each description. I feel like there should be a space in between stone and wall...

Fixed - Z

Green be a shade mos' often seen in what be found outside tha moss and trees an grass an seas but also in someone's eyes. sparks from within Fer nature's in each'un of us deep inside. Tha more ye see the greater be Tha love for what thins that grow tis what I've heard It can come from a bird or well...

I be more'be a rhymin' gal, but here goes *clears her throat * Drop 'im in Tha water wit' 'is feet all flailin' Drop 'im in tha water wit' 'is feet all flailin' Drop 'im in Tha water wit' 'is feet all flailin' Drop 'im in Tha water wit' 'is feet all flailin' Earl'a in Tha mornin' Howssat?*grins and ...

This has been bugging me: Poultry Farm - Fruit Orchard A stonewall constrains the reaching limbs of the fruit trees around you. Some of the fruit has been plucked off and dropped on the ground in half eaten blobs of corrosion . Scurrying sounds in the distance suggest something comes to eat the boun...

I'm Shierah...enchanter...I will join you for as much as I can...sounds fun! *grins*

On my last post, the location was the Mill Pond Bridge...I realized I forgot to include this tidbit.

Apologies,
Shierah

This isn't really a spelling error, more word order being incorrect: A narrow, iron-wrought bridge crosses over the mill pond, continuing a few paces to the east before returning downwards. Although the spaces between the railings are quite wide, they are padded with the same intense cobwebbing that...

also, "resting" should be "rests." Poultry Farm - Farmhouse This room has two sets of bunk beds. One set is on the west wall and other is to the east. A rotting blanket resting on top of each moldy mattress. In the middle of the room sits a large table with a bench on both sides....

I think the word "rocken" in this description maybe should be "rocking" Poultry Farm - Farmhouse Several broken wooden chairs surround a cold, ash-filled fireplace. A web covered table sits in the middle of the room and a broken rocken chair leans at a crazy angle. Fixed - Z

have reported this before but figured it wouldn't hurt to try again... There is a duplicate line in this description: The Beach-Shoreline You are on a vast sandy beach. The wet sand shifts around your feet as you walk. The wet sand shifts around your feet as you walk. To the south you see the shallo...

In the Strange Catacombs, this is repeated over and over depending on where you go: Strange Glowing Catacombs Around you stand massive columns of stone, reaching from ceiling to floor. The cave itself has an eerie green glow to it. Roots hang several feet down from the ceiling. Spiders, mites, ticks...

I think this is more of a missing word than spelling error but see below in the endless desert : Wind whips across your face, scarring it with sand. It is so hot here that it is an effort just to breathe. You can see a range of mountains in the distance to the west. To your east, there is some sort ...

I found a duplicate line as follows: The Beach-Shoreline You are on a vast sandy beach. The wet sand shifts around your feet as you walk. The wet sand shifts around your feet as you walk . To the south you see the shallow estuary and a rising form of a building of some sort in the distance. To the d...